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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    So, we come back again
    Same place where we were back then
    Same mistakes we made and the same games we played
    But nothing compares to what I did for them
    And I came a long way down
    Still didn't make sense when I hit the ground

    So somewhere new, we stand up and begin
    Same place where we've always been
    From the rooftops to the bus stops
    Through all of the tunnels and all of the gunshots
    And we're still pressed by the all of the worst bests
    And it doesn't make sense even though we feel it in our chests

    So now, do we know how to calm down?
    Let it all sink in until it reaches below the ground?
    Sink down to the core of our hearts
    Where only we know that we tried so hard?
    Shows how much we had known
    Only to figure it all out when we hit the stone

    Well, we stand here abandoned
    Our will shoved, pushed and branded
    Stand here alone with our eyes bloodshot
    After all of the gunshots, still managed to stand it
    And though I know the times are getting tough
    And I know what it's like to never get enough
    Hold on to whatever you've got
    Because what you have is what they do not
     
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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    I don't know what this poem is about, but to me it sounds like it's about someone who grew up in a shitty neighborhood, surrounded by bad influences and circumstances. That person got into the wrong kinds of activitys, but whilist doing that, found something that all the other in the occupation did not have. Be it love, or dignity. Anyway that's how I interpreted it.

    Good Job :)!
     
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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Well, actually, it's not quite about what you're saying, but I can see how it's interpreted like that. The poem is very symbolic, of course, in a sense that's very personal to me. So I wouldn't expect other readers to quite understand unless I explained to them.

    Oh, and thanks. I'm glad you like it.
     

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