Tears,anger,pain and lonliness

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    PaperFlowers

    PaperFlowers Well-Known Member

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    Tears

    I saw a tear fall down your face,
    frightened by your own disgrace,
    big round eyes full of sorrow,
    terrified, by daunting tomorrow,
    I saw you lapse into peals of laughter,
    all about your own disaster,
    but what's on the inside?
    are there little tears,
    hidden from view,
    falling right now,
    when the joke is on you.

    Anger

    Wake me up,
    rattle my cage,
    let me out,
    to rant and rave,
    let me scream snd let me yell,
    so you cant hear the wedding bells
    let me break your heart and mind,
    the source of my anger I long to find
    so I can pick it,
    scratch it,
    make it worse,
    my rage an everlasting curse,
    your broken body
    and broken bones,
    are with me,
    as i stand alone...

    Pain

    Three more hours of life,
    then you'll be dead,
    a robot again,
    you can't feel,
    you can't cry,
    won't eat your meals,
    and you don't know why.
    All you know,
    is that pain in your head,
    you want to give up,
    and curl up in bed.
    Eight more hours,
    dreaming of the man,
    he was giving you flowers,
    doing all that he can,
    time passes you by,
    without a doubt,
    with out light or shadow,
    clueless of what it's all about.

    Lonliness

    Sit in your corner,
    and go to sleep,
    lie on you deathbed,
    and hopelessly weep,
    your cold,
    your hungry,
    your practically dead,
    no one will hear your
    so dont cry out for help,
    you're cold,
    you shiver
    wrap your arms around yourself,
    no one cares,
    they won't deliver,
    you're a toy put on the shelf.
     
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    a life in ashes

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    wow, i like them, really emotional- good work , keep it up...
     
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    El Muerto

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    Lonliness is my favourite
     
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    fallenangel

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    these are really good! love tears the best but i also like pain alot too!

    good job there! ;)
     
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    Luke

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    Fucking great,all of them,very well done :)
     
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    Glue

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    Pain is my favourite :D
     
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    PaperFlowers

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    thanks very much!
     
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    Razan

    Razan SUGAAAR!

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    Wow, amazing, I love anger, it's amazing! (w00t)
     

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