i wrote this during my math class, & i thought how everyone ignores me, even my friends. & i just sat there, while everyone else was in their own little world. & me in mine. & i didnt really make a chorus. i sucked @ that. i didnt really care if i wrote it right or not during then. this is one of my first songs/poems ive wrote. enjoy! I sit here All alone Waiting for someone I'm still not sure About this About my life About everything there is in the world I'm no one A vessel in this thing that you call the 'universe' Many people Don't know me The real me On the inside I wear a mask To conceal who I really am To make me look like one of you To act like one of you To be one of you Just to fit in this world Now I try to pull off the mask I pull And strain I try to let myself out Stop being like someone else I try with all my might But I can't I cannot breathe I've sunken into the abyss I'm lost Lost into the nothingness that you call 'Existence' I live But i have no true goals or dreams Nothing to live for Because Nothing No one Is out there for me I'm sunken Far too deep Trying to climb back up Trying to get myself back up I say to myself Get up! But I cannot For I Have transformed Into 'the common person' Where no one is different Where everything is the same......... I'm sunken I try to keep my grip I slip And I fall Now I'm far too deep Trying to get back up.... I'M SUNKEN!!!
wow, that's not that bad at all. That's a very nice song. I like it. It describes me too. Keep it up, man!
wow. thanx! im kinda young, so i thought i would suck, so i just gave it a try. btw, im a girl. lol. but thanx 4 the compliment!
That had to be one of the best submissions of writing material I've ever come across here at LPA. Thank you so much for sharing that. Oh, and thank you for your comment.
Awsome! Is that the first time you've ever wrote lyrics or anything like that? You have to write more, seriously!
yea it is kinda my first time. ive just been kinda saying them in my head & then i finally wrote 'em down. i have more stuff comin, if anyone wants 2 read. & neo, i only said that because you're really good @ that stuff. hey you guys say that my lyrics are good. guess how old i am?? (look down) 11. lol.
It doesn't matter how old you are.. I don't think anyone here cares too much.. Are you planning on writing anymore any time soon?
ok, ok. i got some stuff started anyway......................ill get back 2 you in................god knows how much time.........................DONT PUT SO MUCH PRESSURE ON ME!!!!! sorry. i was a lil pissed. ill bring some more stuff back in a week or so. lol.
It's good.. Lol.. writing a poem in math class and not listening to the teacher.. I also write stuff not in class but during seminars.. I am afraid to not listen to the teacher.. I don't know what's with our class room or with them but we always get noticed whenever we're doing somthing else.. If I'm really sleepy, I just pretend to listen.. but I avoid doing that because i am afraid to not understand the lesson..