I wrote this song a while ago and recorded it recently in my bedroom, nothin TOOO fancy, did as best as I could. Tell me what ya think? http://www.megaupload.com/?d=UALE97T1 Lyrics: Your scent left a trace on my flannel shirt this wasn't anything that I wouldn't prefer. That letter of scrambled words, and "I love you's" Hold onto, that letter. I'll be there soon. 'Cause I lost my heart, In the backseat of your car Underneath the stars, last June. and everything I said, Is everything I meant Oh, I love you... It's true. This sunset, cast a shadow Over everything I miss. And my memory, holds your smile I hope it lasts quite a while. 'Cause I lost my heart, In the backseat of your car Underneath the stars, last June. and everything I said, Is everything I meant Oh, I love you... It's true. On a summer night When I hold you tight I'll whisper, so soft.. Be my valentine My summer valentine And we will, float off.
I really like it man...sounds like an acoustic punk rock song. The only critique about the lyrics is that I found the first verse a little weak but otherwise it's a really nice song.
I love it Nick. I got chills near the end. Great job. I would say though to trust your voice more and really go for it
Nick, I seem to remember you sending me this song a while back on MSN. I loved it then, and I have to say I still do. You're very talented.
Thanks guys, yeah i'm no singer, just a shower singer who showers a lot I guess. I don't write songs to put myself out there, I'll write one maybe every few months or whatever, just for fun and if I like it enough i'll record it. As for the lyrics, I don't sit and write random ones that make sense, I just write from personal experience so it means something to me. So if it's cheesy or weak, that's my life haha.