VERSE: I lost you today Returned from the fray To find you lying there The black holes of your eyes Body sprawled across the chair If you could only hear my cries ---> Very heavy and fast, in crazy time sigs (7/8. 8/8, and 9/8 like lateralus!) Ferocious drumming, you'll like it. For the next verse, I'm gonna add an eerie bassline or something, as this guys getting some evil thoughts in his head! The chorus, i think, will be heavy again. VERSE 2: I have been betrayed somehow Spectral phantoms reappearing Thoughts of madness crease my brow The thought of death now endearing Growing bloodlust now confirms my fears Sanity drips away as I reel back in tears CHORUS: Doom envisioned for some Death the most of all I lurk in the shadows Striking as you crawl VERSE 3: Methodical mayhem drives me ahead There is no way of controlling my rage Animals flee when I'm near, full of dread And still my anger is malnourished. I'm haunting you now You're the one I'm looking for (Solo) VERSE 4: You're caught in a real nightmare As you confess your sins The murderer of my wive Does not deserve to live But will this cease my madness? So much power still in my grasp! CHORUS Outro: He wasn't the real one And I'm still searching..... ---------------------------------------------- Guitar Pro comp. in progress!
Holy hell on ice!! Dude....dude...I don't even...dude!! Its like a melodic metal masterpiece!! Dude..this is such a good song, you better make a GP file for this and send it to me!! I'm SO not kidding!! That is...ugh...I hope I'm not over doing this or anything, but...I love it!! !!!!!!!G.R.E.A.T F.U.C.K.I.N.G J.O.B!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Points to sig* My inspiration right there! Opeth has lyrics fairly similar to this one. Thanks, I got some nice heavy riffs that I have in store for this song, but give me some time i wanna do a good joB!
....i wanna do a good joB! [/b][/quote] He doesn't even have to TRY to do a a good job!! But I can't wait to hear it!
Anyone who would like to hear any of my Guitar Pro compositions, including the part of this one I have done, please contact In.My.Skin, it would be awesome if you checked them out