Spirit Box

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    sickcycle

    sickcycle Well-Known Member

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    Spirit Box


    You wonder if eternity lies
    Faith you say, is all but broken
    Upon their rocky edged alibis
    Now doubt is thus awoken

    Planets spin in hypnotic orbit
    Was just a single word spoken?
    A curious mind doth question it
    Stumbling close to treason

    A spirit box of answers awaits you
    Carved in fire, and inked by unseen hands
    Inside lies the spirit, that answers only a few
    While evidence is tossed in the wind

    But there is a dark guardian to heed
    The Keeper seeks only to deceive
    And plays you to your insatiable greed
    While his hate for the box never leaves

    His siring sinister eyes of grey
    Looking for signs of your coming
    Dark his cloak, that swallows the day
    Eternal damnation, he is awaiting

    But what you wish, is found beyond
    All your doubts are soon to rest
    With the sword of truth evil is gone
    Your heart beats pure, inside your chest

    Capturing life found in the spirit box
    The rain starts to stutter, then cease
    Wisdom is inside, so be rid of your locks
    Gain faith, not hope, for in it release

    The intricate design that time cannot hold
    Inside a white whisper, it is speaking!
    Hear the prophesies, do as your told
    Life is unlocked, once you start believing
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Not bad.
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    beautiful :wub:

    reminds me of Nirvana's "Heart Shaped Box" for some reason.
     
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    fallenangel

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    this was really good! the choice of words used was amazing!

    fab insight you have there! i really like this one. ;)
     
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    arT saveS

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    That was really good. Haha, It went well to the song I was listening to also...Beethovens Symphony #9.
     
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    Glue

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    not bad ;)
     
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    army_skater101

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    incredible. tells a great stoty without giving to much away. you can relate many things in your life to it. great outlet.
     
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    sickcycle

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    Thank you all for comments.
     

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