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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Linja, Apr 14, 2005.

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Sorry about not tellin' you
    I thought you always knew
    I didn't want to leave at the start
    But it was always about you

    Sorry about not tellin' you
    About all the blood and lies
    Bettin' when you found it out
    It turned out a perfect surprise

    Sorry about not tellin' you
    I never meant for it to hurt
    Sad that telling you all this
    I'm left on my own in the dirt

    Sorry that you found out now
    That life ain't all peaches an' cream
    I know you'll close your eyes and cry
    I know this is all just a dream

    Sorry that you found out now
    That everything is lost anyway
    I know you well enough to say
    You'll remember me as a phase

    Wish you never found out now
    That your Angel has crashed to the ground
    The Angel you called your only light
    This Angel doesn't want to be found

    Sorry you never gave me that ring
    That ring I see on her hand
    Even after the disaster I left
    Your heart is still in demand
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    this is tight!!!

    i love this one :lol:

    there is nothing else i can really say just i just seemed be taken from the heart. fab!

    i would love to see more of your stuff.
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    wow, I'm just speechless. this is really deep and sorta realistic, I admire the fact that you've found a way to express emotions like this. This is an awesome poem. sad, but it's a situation that may happen to all of us. Great writing, keep it up!
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Thanks a lot, all of you.
     
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