Sonnet I

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by The Emptiness Machine, Oct 27, 2008.

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Don't really have a name of it.. anyway pls c&c

    I want to live
    And stand before the sand and seas duet
    I want to live
    To watch just one perfect sunset

    But my breath has slowed
    And eyes are growing heavy
    The only comfort in this cold
    Was the hope but it has left me

    I do not know what is after death
    If there is anything at all
    The only knowledge with any depth
    Is that I'll leave without a single call

    Will I wake up tomorrow knowing it was only a dream?
    Or will I hear any voices of lost souls sounding an eternal scream?
     
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    vasiab

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    Wow! You described perfectly my thoughts and feelings...
     

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