hallo,this is a song ive written for my band 27d just wondered what you guys think about it I don’t care, ill be myself, don’t give a damn who wont like it I’ll make this noise; you’ve got a choice. Come follow it Or get away, leave me to it-get in my way and I will Kill you. I’m the disease you want to keep still Get away- or I will infect you Call it infect- (no) I will bless you You dont-Wanna be like me Why not? -I'm what you call free I'm not the shape You wanted to make Individual thoughts broken laws, cause wars Something not thought about in the country of yours Get away- or I will infect you Call it infect- (no) I will bless you You dont-Wanna be like me Why not? -I'm what you call free Freedom isn’t free You have to pay a friggin’ fee Another failed shot at democracy (a nice show)of un-stable society Get away- or I will infect you Call it infect- (no) I will bless you You dont-Wanna be like me Why not? -I'm what you call free Who the hell are you to think that I need you to live? (Get louder until screaming)
Sounds pretty good for a song, don't know what it sounds like perforemed, probly better than the way i read it in my head, like to hear a demo of it sometime, keep going.
reading it, it looks all right but i agree with David that to music it would really make it sound good. looking forward to hearing it when your done.