over and over again i hear, that constant ringing in my ears, mumbling behind my back, seize just as i turn to act, haunting me, forever more, these words I choose to just ignore, My mind will be, to them all, shut, I hold the knife but refuse to cut, hateful words they say to me, stinging like a honey bee, hurting me, this poison burns, and just to think...this came from words, running now, I grab the key, as I unlock the door I do decree, i'll keep their lethal words at bay, Never again to on me prey, Turning now I shut the door, quoth the raven : nevermore what do you think? Please Read and Review *this was written just today about what someone said about me...again*
Thats really freaken good, better than usual! Good job, and I love the line, "To quote the raven, nevermore". One of my favorite poems by my favorite poet, Mr. Poe