So Just (Step Back)

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    Dedicated

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    Keep you life, nobody really cares,
    Nobody wants to hear about your fuckin' affairs,
    So just, keep it shut, nobody wants to know,
    How many lives you've fucked up, how people guys you've blown,
    Or how many times you've fought someone,
    And of them, how many times you've won,
    So just, keep it closed just shut your mouth,
    I don't wanna hear it, head your ass down south,
    With these lyrical gymnastics, you'd get your ass kicked,
    So get off my back, you don't mean jack shit,
    And instead of gettin' back, to your good ol' rap,
    Just remember somethin', you're gonna get a bitch slap,
    Now back to the hate that we all breed,
    That no one knows about, we keep it up our sleeves,
    So take a step back, get ready to retreat,
    'Cause you've just met someone, you can't defeat...

    So just, step back,
    It's not your time to fight,
    So just stop thinkin' you're right,
    So just, step back,
    You'd get your ass kicked,
    I won't let go, won't lose my grip.

    All the hate, we breed inside,
    When it gets released, you'll have nowhere to hide,
    So just, don't bother, don't try to run,
    The battle might be over, but the war's just begun,
    Remind me, how many times you've fought someone,
    And tell me, how many times you think you've won,
    So just, don't underestimate the power of me,
    I'm comin' at you like a tsunami,
    If you ask me nicely, I might lay off a bit,
    But it'll ruin your rep' as "The Shit"
    The one who rules everyone all the time,
    But now, I guess, you're past your prime,
    Now back to the peace we can't achieve,
    I can't believe people are so naïve,
    As to think that you're not the one to blame,
    You started it, now you gotta finish the game...

    So just, step back,
    It's not your time to fight,
    So just stop thinkin' you're right,
    So just, step back,
    Stop playin' the game,
    Or is the game playin' you? Wait, it's just the same...

    Now the end of the world comes back to you,
    The fate on your shoulders of everyone that hates you,
    And every single thing you forced them to do,
    Is now in perspective for all but a few,
    And that few includes not one but two,
    Two of my fists and the rest of me,
    But I'm outnumbered, I knew I would be,
    But if you don't save the world tonight,
    They'll all hate you for giving up the fight...

    So just, step back,
    It's not your time to fight,
    So just stop thinkin' you're right,
    So just, step back,
    Don't make a noise,
    Unless you wanna be the one we destroy...
     
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    Luke

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    Pretty good :thumbsup:
     
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    Adam

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    I like it :)
     
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    Luke

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    Just a quick pointer:

    You might need to find replacement words for the big words in this song cos big words only fit into a song with a certain flexibility (if you get what I'm saying) but otherwise really good job 8.5/10
     
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    Dedicated

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    @hellflame, thanks, I may do that :chemist:


    And thanks for the comments :)
     
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    saunderitos

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    its gd :mike:
     
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    Jamie

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    You know what I always say..so I aint bothering this time B)
     
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    minuteforce

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    I think some of the lines are a bit short and don't fit all that well, but the lyrics are great!

    (I sensed LP elements too)
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks alot everyone ^_^
     
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    Kate

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    I really enjoyed this one.
     

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