Smells Like Cherries

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    The Emptiness Machine

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    Smells Like Cherries

    I sit and I stand
    Looking out the windows
    Hoping you're there

    I look and I see
    The time we've had
    Through all the years

    I want you to know
    That I love you so
    I can never let go

    This is my poem
    In the form of an haiku
    And it's all for you

    It does not matter
    If you are just fictional
    Or reality

    You've always been there
    On the saddest of my days
    And there you will remain

    Yeah, I picked up the pen again today
    And wrote the words that help me get a way
    And you wiped the tears from off my face
    Soaking up all my misery

    You don't have to be
    Anything you don't want to be
    You are what you are

    You were my first love
    And have stayed with me thus far
    I want to thank you

    I'm on the highway
    Where words mold together
    And become concrete

    This is my song
    In the form of an haiku
    Yeah, it's all for you

    Yeah, I picked up the pen again today
    And wrote the words that help me get a way
    And you wiped the tears from off my face
    Soaking up all my misery

    You can never, ever. No, not ever be replaced
    You will linger, lurk, loiter, loaf, and hover where you stay
    Oh sweet gratifying poetry
    Like a tree, grown within the root of me

    You don't have to be (structured)
    Anything you don't want to be (I'm sure)
    You are what you are ( what you are is what you are)

    Ode to poetry
    Oh poetry
    Oh cherry tree
    Oh cherry cherry
    Smells like cherries
    A verse form of scented imagery

    Some times I'm so blue
    Just not in the mood
    But I'm no fool
    That I owe all to
    My ode to
    Poetry​
    _ Jesse B _ / Gan
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    Please Comment.

    (Note from poet below, can skip)

    Okay, now that you've struggled through that seemingly endless writing let me tell you of what I, myself think of this poem-song.

    At first when I wrote this it was like "What the hell is this shit? It's horrible. IT'S HORRIBLE." That is the thought that first went into my head. I read it again, (as I advise you to if you're kind of confused to as what it's about) and I then I thought "Wait a second, This is a poem, about a poem. No, this is a LOVE song about a poem. Who writes love songs about poems? I have no idea. But that's what this is, and that makes it unique and different from almost all the other things I've read or written. Actually, to go even deeper it's not a love song about a poem. It's a love song about writing a poem and how I feel while I'm writing the poem, not necessarily after because sometimes when I write I get depressed. This one though, it gave me a weird after taste in the from of a thought that at first I thought was unpleasant and I then one that genuinely liked it. I don't know if you people will like it. Things are messy in the world of poetry but I'm glad you've taken the time to read it all the same. Thank you.
     

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