heres another song, please read and reply SINCERE LIES Keeping all the lies, inside Hiding behind, this disguise Facing not smiles, but denials (I know I can’t defend) (What I only pretend) This problem revolves We don’t wanna be involved So how can it be solved? Going to collide with this fight tonight Gunna get it out of my system They won’t even realise I left em Don’t wanna commend them No such thing as sincere lies All they are, are severe lies It makes me cry So I get a tissue to dry my eyes Found out that this tissue Was an issue, of your pain Its all coming back to you again What you give is what you get So why don’t you admit Your becoming upset Realising what its done to me Too late now I cant be saved So im digging myself an early grave Now you see, what you’ve done to me At the funeral you cry I wonder why You didn’t give a #### when I was alive I was see-through I was attached to you, but in the end What you, told me was untrue
That's like a (9 half/10)! Really good rhyme, good language, and good rhythm. I feel blessed to read it but there's no angel emo!
thanks for your replies, Black Panther if you like this and you havent checked out my other songs (my first song, hurtful pride, ignorance) i suggest you do.