Signed With A Kiss

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    Derek

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    <div align=center>[​IMG]</div><div align=center>Signed With A Kiss
    A Poem By Derek Jonathan Oswald

    Dear Love,
    I'm sitting here quietly,
    The leaves drifting in the breeze,
    Writing a letter to you
    Because I want you to believe,
    That you've given me strength,
    And for you I've made it through,
    Your presence has lifted me,
    Gave me feelings, forever true.

    Sit down for a moment,
    This may be confusing or I may be moving too fast,
    But I can no longer let myself rot tearfully in the past,
    This pain I felt inside of me, I've felt it for too long,
    Just know that all I've ever wanted was a chance to love someone
    And now that you are here it is clear to me you are the one,
    Your smile, your flair, your beauty and your hair,
    Glow brighter then the sun,
    And from the second I glanced right into your eyes,
    You were my hidden blessing,and my enchanted surprize,
    And while hours became days and the time passed me by,
    I couldn't go back to a time when my heart had felt this size

    Just know that girls like you are in limited supply,
    Dreaming of you I let out another wishful loving sigh,
    Down in my heart and soul is where your image lies,
    With this I know I could never lose what I feel inside.

    So if you ever try to find that sweet and special guy,
    Please dont let another hoping moment pass me by,
    For anything you ever needed wasnt high up in the sky,
    It was right here in front of you,
    It was always right here by your side.


    Signed With A Kiss,
    Derek</div>
     
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    Jawknee

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    :eek:

    This has got to be one of the best poems I've ever come across on LPA.

    :D

    Derek, if this girl doesn't accept your offer, she's nuts!!!
     
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    Derek

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    Or just, off. ;)

    No really..sooner or later she's gotta crack. I mean im pouring my soul out to her.
     
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    That's just.......WOW! (w00t)


    It's fantastic. You'll get the girl ^_^
     
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    WOW.

    i smell wedding bells

    i also smell my invitation in the mail box?

    :lol:
     
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    Terry

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    lol. good job!! i bet youll get the girl. DEFINITELY.
     
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    *teary*

    Yes derek, I'll marry you!
     
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    wow, that's amazing. keep it up derek! you'll get her!
     
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    WOW!!!

    i want summit like that for a girl im after
     
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    Derek

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    Btw I made that image up top, I'm very proud of it. Too bad I had to shrink it.
     
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    Well........did you get the girl?? ^_^ BTW, I love the first verse......esp how it starts off with "dear love"........that's so romantic but nobody seems to write like that anymore..which is a shame... great work!
     
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    great work! :)
     
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    Derek

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    No, I never had a chance to date her. She turned out to be totally different then I imagined her to be, and she went around me for some other guy that took her virginity and used her for everything she had. She could have had an amazing boyfriend, but she never loved me and led me on through certain things that helped to suggest she actually felt something for me when she didn't. Hence the angry and spiteful "Motionless" that explains the anger I felt when I realized I had been living a big lie for the past 7 months before that song was written.

    After realizing that it was a hopeless case my feelings for an ex girlfriend I dated two years ago slowly started to regenerate as I finally figured out that no matter what I went through, she was always there to help, which gave birth to the poem "Distant Memory" in which I told her that my feelings never quite went away. They just were suppressed as we went our seperate ways, in the relationship world.

    I still haven't gotten my second chance with Danielle and I don't think it will happen within the next couple of months but as you can see by the heartfelt song "My Silent Hope" my love for her will remain strong no matter what goes on in our lives or friendship.
     
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    aww...*tear* well good luck! whatever girl turns you down is a nucking fut!
     
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    Was that flirting? :mellow: *laughs* :lol:
     
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    Was that flirting? :mellow: *laughs* :lol: [/b][/quote]
    haha! you wish Derek!
     
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    haha! you wish Derek! [/b][/quote]
    Pssshhh. :rasberry: :teehee:
     
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    aww.. *sniffs*.. it's a raelly good poem, you're really good at poetry, not many guys i know would write something like that.. aww.. who wouldnt fall for this? its so nice.. you'll get her..^^
     
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    Derek

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    Not her...not anymore at least...too many 'eh..' feelings.

    Danielle though..thats a different story..
     
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    Leslie

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    :'( wow derek, you are a completely amazing writer... such a damn good poem... your whole story about her reminds me of a past relationship. anyways, great job. ^_^
     

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