Sick

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    LP_Freak_2735

    LP_Freak_2735 Well-Known Member

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    LP_Freak_2735, Apr 20, 2005



    I thought I made it,
    But then I fell.
    Engulfed in fire,
    Back into hell.
    Sick yet again.
    In my head, where it's always been
    mangled in a mess of thoughts
    Living the lie I wish I'd never bought.
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Linja, Apr 21, 2005



    Wow. This is really powerful. I love it! The last end, 'A lie I wish I'd never bought.' It's my favorite part, please keep writing! :D
     
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    fallenangel

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    fallenangel, Apr 21, 2005



    this is really good but i think if you could extend it more it would be even better! good job!
     
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    bleeding rose

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    bleeding rose, Apr 21, 2005



    Finally some else like me!!:D It's great keep on writing can't wait for the next one!
     

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