I wrote this because I have this feeling somebody in my life doesn't seem to need me, but I still care and need them more even though respect in their choices piss me off. She's got green eyes Deception to lie I know she see somebody ele It's not me I know It's not what I need To plee that you hate me They're not greedy But they're green Pulling my strings Pulling me closer to believe You need me Phony feelings you feed I know that you don't need me I got these scars Still fresh in my mind You've crossed the line Haunting eyes look back Before you attack I must get back Lust must repress But I degress to express You don't need me You've lost my respect You tricked me And You hate me You don't need me And you made me Want you more She's got green eyes That take me for a ride I'd ride this wave if she'd let me But it's obvious she don't need me Wont you stop to think it over Besting me seems to be all she ever does It's bugs like slugs I think I need hugs But she doesn't need me So I'm greedy But green eyes attract things Opposite of blackness Dank cigerrete buds And The drunken funkness Maybe I smell Maybe I dwell on why I'm alone Just throw me a bone Show me you owe me From the time I gave on the phone I'll show you why you need me Why I write these feelings Dotting them down as checks You've lost my respect
i like the..desperation and regret combo. but you have to work on your flow, and inbetween your choice of words throws me a bit off track. but the...sense of emotion is strong. nice work.