She Bit With Vampire Teeth

Some more lyrics from my new band, "Seven Years Behind".

I'd class these lyrics as slightly crude, but I'm so proud of them, please tell me what you think.

 

I found it pretty good, much better than the last one you posted here.

Although, I didn't really like this part:

 

Take out the "and sung her a song", it's awful.

Thanks Dusan, what was wrong with the other one? XD

 

I don't know, the lyrics weren't that bad, but to me it just seemed like every other song out there about growing up and leaving your town. You know, it didn't have that "something" that every song needs to have in order to be unique. But hey, that's just my opinion

 

That's the part I pointed out when he did a demo of this song for me, other than that it's really awesome! Just wait 'til you hear it with music

 

It's all a work in a progress, so thank you. It was gonna be a concept CD at first, hence the leaving the town thing, but I sort of dropped it for now.

Thanks though, I'll work on it. Thanks too Dave <3

 

Lyrics are interesting. Good work though, let me know when audio is available.

 

Cheers man, I've just been playing it acoustic, but I'll have some live stuff soon.

<3