Shades of Night

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    Will

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    Here's the first real song I've written in a long time. Please read and respond. Thanks.

    SHADES OF NIGHT

    You're with me
    I'm with you

    I know now why you've been so hesitant
    You've kept it all inside thinking you can't
    But you don't have to change for me at all
    Everything about you's what made me fall
    And no one's gonna change that in my mind
    Just look a little deeper and you'll find
    That my heart is as true to you as day
    And I hope you'll find this out some way
    I just want you to be mine
    For the rest of time

    I can see into your soul
    You aren't sure where you should go
    Take my hand and you will see
    That being by my side is all you'll need

    Did you know you're with me all the time?
    And everywhere I look you're in my sight
    Thoughts of you are what keep me in check
    With everything that I haven't lost yet
    And no one's gonna change my love for you
    Just come a little closer, see it's true
    Every time I blink I see your eyes
    And now I've come to grips, I realize
    I just want you to be mine
    For the rest of time

    I can see into your soul
    You aren't sure where you should go
    Take my hand and you will see
    That being by my side is all you'll need

    I can see into your soul
    You aren't sure where you should go
    Take my hand and you will see
    That being by my side is all you'll need

    You're with me
    I'm with you
    You're with me
    I'm with you
    You're with me
    I'm with you

    I'm sorry that I've overwhelmed you
    But you gotta know my heart is true
    Maybe one day you'll be with me
    I'm looking to that day, it's all I see

    I can see into your soul
    You aren't sure where you should go
    Take my hand and you will see
    That being by my side is all you'll need

    I can see into your soul
    You aren't sure where you should go
    Take my hand and you will see
    That being by my side is all you'll need

    You're with me
    I'm with you
    I'm with you
    I'm with you
     
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    blackpanther626

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    (w00t) WOW!! That was awsume, that really hit my heart cuz i care about someone alot just like in the song, um...i just wanted to ask for your permission. if it's i'll right, if i may copy and paste your song to an e-mail and send it the person that i really care about, i'll wait til i get your answer :) , but really that is an amazing song, you did a great job*^_^*.
    /\ /\ ~*marissa*~* a.k.a KiTtIe "meow" o o
    =Y=
    \_/
     
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    Will

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    Go ahead but please don't claim it as your own. :)
     
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    Alacrity

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    that was really really good.....
     
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    Jawknee

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    Will, I'm jealous of your song-writing talent. You may have said I have poetry talent, but it's funny, I can't write songs the way you do; it's so hard for me. I hope one day I can hear these songs. You're one of the best writers. ;)
     
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    blackpanther626

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    Awesome! (9/10)
     
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    Andrea

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    Excellent!!! :)
     

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