Several unfinished lyrics and poems

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    OK, well, when I'm bored in my classes, I'll just start writing randomly, and I generally don't finish my pieces. I decided to post up all the unfinished pieces I've written over the past couple weeks. I want to turn a couple into full pieces, though, so make sure you let me know what ones you liked the most. Also bear in mind that I know some lines are taken from other songs. That's what they call "inspiration" or, in the way I've done it, "paying homage."

    "The Obligatory Introduction Piece, Complete with a Chamber Choir, an Ensemble of Strings and Eerily Vague Lyrics (but without the Chamber Choir, Ensemble of Strings and Eerily Vague Lyrics [That Would Make it Just an Introduction Piece, but Still Obligatory])"

    And so there I was
    Watching you walk away one more time
    This time it was different
    This time it was for good
    Your cheating heart, your lying lies
    They're not something I've got to deal with any longer
    Fuck you, fuck you, fuck you
    You are a liar and a whore (thank you, Alex)

    There was a time I thought I loved you
    You turned out to be someone I hardly knew
    I fought so hard (you don't even know)
    Then I found out your true aspirations
    You couldn't even promise fidelity
    You dirty cheating whore
    Just what were you thinking?

    CHORUS

    I let my guard down
    You tore me apart like a wolf
    Stole my innocence (fucked me in more ways than one)
    I let you in, you stole my heart
    You stole my soul, polluted my mind
    You dirty cheating whore
    Just what the fuck were you thinking? (hell, what was I thinking?)

    CHORUS

    "I Can't Decide What's Worse"

    We're under fire

    Let the bullets destroy the air
    And burn holes through the oxygen
    Now they're becoming what we breathe
    Every day walking through fire
    Your bullets with butterfly wings
    Leave deeper gunshot wounds than most
    Promising hope, a better life
    Destroying us all one by one

    We're under fire
    I can't decide what's worse
    Trial by fire
    Or them seeking their purse

    They're tearing down our blues skies
    Becoming all we despise
    The soldiers we love so dear
    Have become their weapon
    All that we love's not near
    'Cause they've become weapons

    CHORUS x4

    We remain proud and salute the troops
    We don't agree but they've got work to do

    "She Tried to Explain it to Me (but I Just Didn't Listen)"

    And she said

    "He followed me home last night
    I was so scared, I didn't turn around
    He followed me to my porch
    I ran inside and slammed the door
    The lock clicked, I thought I was safe
    But he shattered my window and came inside
    He chased me to my room
    Knocked down the door
    Pushed me onto my bed
    And he forced me to play Yahtzee all night"

    Then everything got fuzzy
    When I woke up, my wallet was gone
    I don't know what happened

    "Into the Mystic"

    She looked at him like she'd never see him again
    His little Katie was prepared to leave his side
    Off to a brand-new world with brand-new adventures
    Cut short by an angry child

    An angry father looking for answers
    Brothers and sisters searching for truth
    All they really want is closure
    The Mystic is calling out every one of their names

    He couldn't utter a word, decided to shoot
    His smitten brother was left heartbroken that day
    Las Vegas called his name but it didn't answer
    Cut short by an angry child

    CHORUS

    Ravaged by the wolves
    Dave died on that day
    Protecting a victim
    Upon him placed the blame
    Broken inside, he's shattering
    The knife in his belly
    Just let the blood flow
    A gunshot to his head
    Vengeance was won
    But the killer's still loose

    CHORUS

    Note: I want to finish this one (and obviously make the lyrics more ambiguous) but I'll work on it.

    "Short Song Titles (Are So Cliché)"

    Behind enemy lines, Ryan was in need of rescue
    His brothers killed in combat
    Three members of a family slain by the enemy
    A mother is left grieving back at home
    In need of answers
    In need of the hope that Ryan still fought on
    That Ryan was fighting for his family's honor
    Fighting for his mother
    Left alone in her dire time of need

    The search party set off
    Bullets fly, grenades explode, men collapse
    Brothers, fathers, uncles, sons
    All slain at the cost of war

    "It's Far Better to Be Afraid"

    It's far better to be afraid
    To surround yourself with the lies
    Such that everything evens out
    Because you'll be the only one
    To have seen the end approaching
    Think of all the life you have made
    You'd protect them under their skies
    And not even think twice about
    Saving their lives until time's done
    To keep their bodies from smoking

    My heart aches ever so subtly
    Every time I think of the end coming near
    I can hardly take all the pain inside
    I'm left here diminished and fumbling
    Every time I think of the things that I fear
    Death is insidious and takes all our lives
     

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