Scars

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Scars

    Underneath the skin,
    Crumbling out from within,
    All my defences fail,
    And now you see my mind,
    With all I want inside,
    And all I left behind,

    Some will never fade,
    Some aren't even there,
    But all of them exist because you don't care,

    Scars that make me fade,
    Scars that turn to gray,
    Scars you cannot see,
    These scars are part of me,

    The stars are burning out,
    Building walls of doubt,
    The rain is falling,
    All through the night,
    I'm losing touch,
    But I can reach the light.


    ...thoughts please...
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    reaaaaaally like the way you wrote the first and last part of it...I sorrta got lost in the middle of...but that's probably just me ^_^
     
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    Evil Angel

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    its good.it rhymes well.
     
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    a life in ashes

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    Thanks guys.
     

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