Running away (from each other)

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    Seinfeld

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    Running away (from each other):

    I feel you're breaking on the inside
    won't you lay off your facade of lies?
    Don't you know what this takes out of me?
    How long will it take you to see?

    I've lied to get away from myself
    I've cried to cover up all of my guilt
    I'm running away
    I'm running away
    But you still stay

    I know you now better than before
    Still I won't unlock the door
    Do we have what it takes to keep up?
    How far to go until we give up?

    I've lied to get away from myself
    I've cried to cover up all of my guilt
    I'm still running away
    still running away
    But you still stay

    So you've showed me how dumb I was
    Dumb enough to believe I had your trust
    You really made me fall for your show
    So it's really me who's watching the other one go

    I'm half way behind
    And you're just out of sight
    How could I have thought I was on top
    Serves me well 'cause I'm left to drop

    And I still lie
    Lie to get away from myself
    And I still cry
    Cry to cover up all of my guilt

    And now you're running away
    Running away[2x]

    Won't you please...




    thoughts plz...
     
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    miny_girl_LP

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    i like it .Really it's really good.
    Want me to try and write a reply to yours.I could try:hmm: but if only u want!It could be fun if i wrote a reply and you wrote back and so on and so on.someone else might even join!What do u say?:teehee:
     
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    Seinfeld

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    uhm....reply?....you mean like...adding text parts to the lyrics?....that would be really cool ^_^
     
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    well not adding .... but something like that...i mean like you say this to someone and someone else replys with a poem of his own refering to the theme.(Just to ask, is this a poem?Cause i feel this is a song.Am i right?)
     
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    Seinfeld

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    You're right it is a song but replying with poems and stuff's a really cool Idea ^_^ we should do that!
     
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    ok ,thanks for liking my idea.so i'll try to write one now but i don't promise anything big:blush:
    ***
    I'm not running away from you,
    i'm running away cause i feel i should to.
    I'm scared...
    from the feelings you brought up inside me,
    scared from accepting them.

    I'm too far now from you,
    too far from you to see it in my eyes.
    There's no other way to show you
    then to ruturn back.

    If i turned back and run towards you,
    if i returned...
    will you accept me the way i am,
    like a scared little girl from a lightning storm.
    will you agree to cherish me back in your arms
    and pretend i never made that mistake?

    But i see it now
    it's too late
    to late for you to understand this.
    even if i'd made my way back to you
    You've closed your eyes for me
    and won't accept the reborn feeling!
    ***
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Feeling what you've just rediscovered
    I keep telling myself ''you never loved her''
    just to get over what you've put me through
    but when I look into the mirror I still see you

    I'm so confused...

    with what is going on around me today
    If I should believe you or just stay away
    Somehow I'm so connected to your feelings
    but how do I know you won't nail me to the ceiling

    I'm finally broken...

    I can't keep myself from thinking about
    what might happen if we tried it out
    If we gave each other another chance
    It all looks so right with a second glance
    So I'll close my eyes once more
    And hope you will guide me towards
    whatever awaits us on our path
    I've saved these words to the last:

    'I love you'


    (hope it's okay...well looking forward to a reply ^_^)
     
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    hmm...

    ***
    your feelings seem so similar to mine
    and that makes me shine
    the thought that you want me back
    makes me happy as hell and you know that

    so tell me that you feel the same
    and my reflection in the mirror won't go away
    cause i'll be once more by your side
    again all the way

    i'll guide you through
    from everything you want me to
    as you once did
    never judging or doubting no matter what it is
    ***

    (it was really though for me to write it cause this is the first time i have written in rime.:blush: But hope you like it even if it's a bit short.)
     
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    Seinfeld

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    I feel so glad to have you back
    finally life is cutting me some slack
    But now I'm insecure so unsure
    'cause even your intentions back then weren't pure

    I'm so paranoid...

    What if your just using me again?
    just letting me believe I had your hand?
    Now I'll distance myself from you
    Just so you don't get to make a move

    I'm so dirty...

    Covering myself with all your sins
    I've decided to dive right in
    right into all that made us fall apart
    everything that's running this corrupted heart
    We're daring to break once more
    daring to torture each other like before

    (still hoping you like it ^_^)
     
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    I love it!!!

    ***
    It's seems that you don't want me anymore
    seems that you want everything to be like before
    so if that's what you want
    i'll let go

    I have no heart
    no soul left because of you
    no strenght to even let you go
    so i'll leave you the way you are
    never sheding the final words of this relationship

    How could you leave this way again
    with the thought of you stuck in my brain
    don't you have any mercy
    to the person who was by your side always
    and now...all you wanna do is curse me

    But i'm not to blaim for your feelings
    of insecurity and shame
    of that, that you protected a person that needed you then

    But remember this
    every morning that i wake up
    from a dream of you that haunted me that night
    i'll pull out my heart and drain the blood inside
    with it all the memory that i was by your side

    even with no blood left inside
    i'll try to forget you with all my might
    because of what you left inside
    is the memory in vain
    that something could become of me again!
    ***
     
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    Seinfeld

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    WHOA!!!....loving it!!!


    ***

    I'm not willingly leaving you behind
    Misunderstandings are what made me so blind
    Still it's to late to take back what I've said
    to late to love you since your heart is dead

    I'm in regret...

    that this hurts for the both of us
    But it's my fault it came to this so I shouldn't fuss
    Eventhough I'm the reason we fell
    I'll throw a fit if it kept us from emotional hell
    If it brought you back I'd even give up my voice
    but I've driven the pain to deep so it's not my choice

    I'm living in pain...

    knowing you're no longer to be called my own
    and with this I hope I have shown
    that love can be as painful as it is easing
    'cause no broken heart ever stops bleeding

    (okay...this is getting really deep....I'm loving this game ^_^)
     
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    i'm so glad that you like it

    ***
    I wake up every day
    with a new shine in my eyes
    hope i don't break away
    from the cacoon i've made around myself

    It keeps me safe
    untill i heal
    from the bruises where you've caressed my face
    but my skin still peels

    My skin it yearns...
    it screams!
    it burns!
    for your touch again

    Infront of the mirror i stand tall
    hoping to see you
    but i see only myself revived
    with a confused expression on my face
    that i've forgotten what is love

    i see you on the stage
    screaming and shouting the pain i've left you with
    i wanna cry but i don't know how
    i wanna scream with you but but i've forgotten how.

    you don't see me cause your eyes are closed
    when you open them a tear rolls
    and a bloodsucking bitch rushes by your side

    seems you've forgotten me now
    hope that we were friends
    so you can show me how
    how to forget the pain you've left me with
    so these bruises don't sting again
    ***
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Screaming and screaming until my vocal cords bleed
    Still I won't stop screaming from under your feet
    I can no longer speak because my voice has been strained
    And I can never forget because my thoughts have been stained
    Your grip has tightened so much that I cannot breathe
    still I have enough air left to bleed and scream
    While the stage beneath me slowly vanishes
    My voice fails and I'm squirming underneath these thrashes
    of your sadness that will not let me be
    That will not let go of what's left to see
    In the darkness of broken hearts and forgotten hopes
    Dying inside of thoughts I've been forced to choke
    away from all of what's real to us
    killed off all my trust

    ....towards you
     
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    it's getting fun!!!

    ***
    wish i wasn't there to see all of that
    wish i wasn't there to feel that you thought of that
    the look on your face
    when you saw i was there
    was distraught and pale
    scared that you would say something
    i left the room
    the words that echoed in my head
    were of your new girlfriend's-"who is that?"
    and you replying "Just a memory!"
    gasping for air
    just walked outside
    the sun hit my fair hair
    in the glitter of the light
    i realized i was not dead
    life has just began for me
    and the thought of you began to erase
    ***
     
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    Seinfeld

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    The words I've spoken hurt me more than yours
    And all hope I've broken has now sealed all doors
    Wishing I'd realize I'm no longer alone
    But also my heart has turned to stone

    It's come to far...

    Scream, pain and hate
    No reason for this debate
    with myself again
    driven right off the edge

    Your words / a memory piercing flesh and bone
    All my visions and plans have been blown
    away from everything I've created up to here
    losing you, only that has been my fear

    But it's to late...

    Scream, pain and hate
    No reason for this debate
    with myself again
    driven right off the edge
     
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    its like a lyrics battle, they are all really good though..
     
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    ***
    now you remembrer what you missed
    while then you couldn't look at me with trust
    hope she deserves you better
    hope you find peace at least
    'cause you know that we were both in this
    that ruined our lives forever
    you wake up every night
    all sweaty and distraught
    about the dream you had
    how i always seemed to find my pleasure
    down your throat
    where i would sink my teeth into your neck
    and feed of the pian
    you scream and shout
    that will haunt you every night
    'cause you know that she can never replace
    the nights we had
    ***

    thanks NurcX!
     
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    Seinfeld

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    thankies that you think it's good ^_^

    ***
    Damn it's to much I'll leave it all behind
    While leaving you all in your bitter-sweet bind
    Somehow I know I won't miss you anymore
    But miss the feeling living as a whore
    Miss getting over you by starting over a new
    Miss beating your feelings, 'til they're black and blue
    Miss putting myself through all this misery
    But looking forward to all that will pleasure me

    No you, no game and no pain to overcome,
    No heart, no soul and no me to overrun,
    No heat, no cold and no tease left to stun me anymore
    ***


    Sry that it's so short...^_^
     
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    ***
    seems to me that you're saying all of that to make me pissed
    seems you still care
    and you have a lot of thing left unsaid
    that you can't bеаr
    never mind me
    i'm better off alone
    it's you i'm worring for
    i've steped hard on my feet
    and you see...nothing can break from beneath
    i've forgotten
    but you still shiver, still remeber
    and by the mention of my name
    you remember evrything again and again...
    ***

    uff ... it's getting harder and harder!I'm starting to get writer's blocks:unsure:
     
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    Seinfeld

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    (my answer's sorrta the new song I've posted....just so we get into a new kind of 'song argument theme' ^_^ lol)
     

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