Writing: Robert's Writings

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    lime treacle

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    I'll post here every once and a while, I guess. For now I have this.




    we'll drown
    in a darkened room
    our death will be as sweet
    as the honey we shall eat
    in a darkened room
    and your boots I will untie
    laces slither down your side
    in a darkened room
    you will bend me at the waist
    I'll breathe in the moist with haste
    in a darkened room
    it shall become our tomb
    oh, my love, why would we lie
    all we wanted was to die
    and I'll see you soon
    ripped in two, oh beau
    ty of my darkest dreams
    tearing my heart by the seams
    spit in it your everything
    submerge, but don't wash me clean


    in a darkened room
     
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    cool! it's dark and sensual! Very nice!
     
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    lime treacle

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    Litter the ground
    With your unyielding constellation
    Tears fold their way
    To the cracks in your questions

    Breathe in the rain
    You'll choke and you'll stay

    Foreign the sound
    Of this apparent obligation
    Must be to you
    When all you do is remove

    The black from the gray
    Yet the white's no protection

    Sweetie, where to
    Point me in the direction
    If you knew the way
    Your stars would help me

    Yet they're spread
    All about by the folks' inattention

    Pick them up if you please
    By that time I will leave
     
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    lime treacle

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    Got something, playing with my English.




    stones and snakes in grass
    past bones and stakes you'll pass
    roam this desolation, cast
    shadows on the duskened trunks

    the caterpillars' ways of telling fairy tale endings in tomes endless, you'll learn them, but fast
    not for long will you last
    sugar-sweet tenderness of your apprehension to wilderness shall be the end of your creature
    so don't butcher this fraction of your time and be a listener to the lecture whilst the leeches' suction makes you cower from beneath her

    it's neater when you let it burn all the way down,
    scourge it and string it up for the world to see and know forever that you shan't sever from the blood that made you,
    dishonor shan't ever fail you for it keeps you alive,
    may they gaze wide-eyed upon their sorry red lie
    they shall fail even to try to set it aright, and if you don't take that chance,
    we might as well dance off into the twilight and say:
    my life, this remains my life, damned be everything but this, we can't fall into the sun
    but it shall do the work for us.
     

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