Revenge

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Dedicated, Nov 15, 2006.

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    Dedicated

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    Haven't posted anything here in a while so I thought I'd give you guys a view of what I've been working on for the past however long. This is just one of a few.

    Hope you like it.

    "Revenge"

    This song,
    Is the one I wrote when I wanted you to cry,
    Like I did all those years ago,
    And I,
    Want you to know that I forgive you for what you did,
    It wasn't your fault; you had to give in.

    If love is a strong word then what would you call it?
    Possibly lust or just caring too much?

    I'd come back,
    Running to you yet I'm finding my legs break,
    Like water under stones,
    That I've thrown so far that they're out of sight,
    Like the memories that I've tossed from my mind.

    If love is a strong word then what would you call it?
    Possibly lust or just caring too much?
    I doubt it,
    There's no other way of portraying what this is,
    It's my revenge in the form of words which burst on my lips.

    My emotions are so fucked right now,
    Okay, I want you to think of a four letter word,
    That begins with 'l' and ends with 'e',
    No, not 'love' or 'like' baby,
    It's 'lure'.

    If love is a strong word then what would you call it?
    Possibly lust or just caring too much?
    I doubt it,
    There's no other way of portraying what this is,
    It's my revenge in the form of words which burst on my lips.
     
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    Linja

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    It is not one of your best, Dedicatedear, but brilliant nonetheless.
     
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    esaul17

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    Good job. I liked the lure bit, it was clever.
     

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