Release me

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    Debus

    Debus Morbid Fascination LPA Addict

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    Well this is about my third time in here. I'm not the best writer but i try. Here goes with another

    Release me

    Release me from your treacherous hands
    Give me my sanity back
    I don't want you in my life anymore
    Go find someone else to torture
    You screwed up my thoughts
    Fooled me into thinking it was all ok
    Well now i realise you're not worth anything
    Not to me anyway

    Release me from your suffocating grip
    Let go of my mind
    What happened to you?
    I thought we were friends
    Now scars burn deep inside of my soul
    From the crimson thoughts of you
    That haunt my mind constantly
    And won't go away

    Very short yes but yet another release of anger for me. I have been trying to think of another verse to go with it but i can't come up with anything. Anyway please tell me what you think ^_^
     
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    Glenn

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    Very nice! Sounds Evanescencey... :p
     
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    Trish

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    Woah! Thats way good!
    Well done!
     
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    Debus

    Debus Morbid Fascination LPA Addict

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    Thanks for the feedback guys :D
     
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    Nowhere Kid

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    Two thumbs up! Awesome work! ^_^
     

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