rate this begining

jessica took out the torture instruments and said "i'm going to have fun" alton struggled and said' have you got mad?!'

 

continue if u want to

 

Thank you, my dear friend. Go write a novel with that beginning. Such force it has. It looks good on the first page of a book. I can imagine it.

edit: thanks for mentioning me.

 

My reply is too graPHIC. I apologise.



edit: Sorry! accidental double post!!