Rape.

Pleasant and rippling,
My little heaven.

But walk again,
Now you see I am here.

Not knowing I was here,
Seeing my fear.

Knowing you will always be in my heart,
Tears me apart every second.

The slapping and the kicking,
The yelling and the spitting.

Spite me now and strike me later,
Don't say I never said no.

Catch me but you let go,
Long ago, I tried.

To tell you, you monster,
You hurt me so badly.

I am a prisoner of my own soul,
I am a prisoner of you.

Entrapped in a world never so real,
I lay here hoping to die.

 

Fucking awesome dude. B)

What, this is so sick my sunglasses fell off.

 

nice,i wrote a song about rape,don't comment 'cause its an old post,but read and PM me on what you think or something


No escape

 

no,it has to be in there,it creates the feel and gives the song a macabre atmosphere

 

Its a very powerful piece of writing and I think most people here know I like powerful pieces of writing

Excellent work B)

 

thanks for ur feedback !!