Rap Wars

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    Jamie

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    Battered faces
    My memory erases
    So many ways to hate this
    Stop tryin' to fake this
    My heart races
    As I push through this
    I need to slow down
    This rythem should drop down
    The dark hole
    Inside your youth hostle
    Choking you inside
    Making you run and hide
    Spiders crawl in the hole
    They take control
    Making you wish you weren't told

    I'll come and hunt you
    Poke some fun at you
    Look at you
    You disgrace the world
    You shouldn't be allowed to live

    Standing at the window
    Don't know where you need to go
    Stop and listen to this beat flow
    Oh, you don't know
    Whats left for me to learn
    I stand and watch the world turn
    Around me, I cannot see
    Whats left here for me
    Something's hidden inside of me
    I cannot feel what it is
    All the thoughts starting to whizz
    Bubbling and fizzing
    Listening to the sound and wishing
    That I hadn't been told

    I'll come and hunt you
    Poke some fun at you
    Look at you
    You disgrace the world
    You shouldn't be allowed to live

    This rap game is mine
    You wanna try?
    Get your ass back in line
    Wait your turn
    To step up to this mic
    Rap your heart out psyche
    I'm gunna batter and bruise you
    And lyrically abuse you
    Then I'm gunna use you
    And feed you to my dogs
    So go with my flow
    Its pretty damn slow
    Hit us back with your show
    Standing up in your youth hostle
    Chocking inside
    Making you run and hide
    Spiders crawl in the hole
    They take control
    Making you wish you weren't told

    I'll come and hunt you
    Poke some fun at you
    Look at you
    You disgrace the world
    You shouldn't be allowed to live
     
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    Andrea

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    I really like it!
    Excellent! :)
     
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    Jamie

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    hehe thanks
     
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    Terry

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    ~loves it~
     
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    :eek: Classical :eek:
     
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    Cal

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    amazing ;)
     
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    Jamie

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    Cheers ma people
     
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    StiRofEck0s

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    you definately have talent, good job! :)
     
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    Jamie

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    thanks

    Its not that good and I am improving everytime I write a new one it seems to be totally different one way or another.
     

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