R.A.P (first verse)

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by saunderitos, Sep 15, 2005.

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    Paul

    Paul The Ultimate Victory LPA Super Member

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    I officially declare that this is the greatest thread I've ever seen on LPA.

    Here's my 50 Cent inspired freestyle:

    Listen here fools I'm the mastah, causing lyrical disaster
    Get in my way i'm gonna blast yah
    Not with a glock, but a tech cause it's fastah

    You try and mess with me, I'll pop your dome
    Cuase when theres a shoot out, I'm the only one going home
    You will be laying in a pool of your own blood
    Gettin religious, cause you know yah done
    In the hood, y'all know I'm number 1

    Now if you wanna throw down and forget the guns
    Thats good enough for me, either way yah done
    Cause in the end, it doesn't matter
    Not when your the one whos guts have been splattered.

    I wrote that in 2 minutes. Yeah, it sucks.
     
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    Minus

    Minus ohai LPA Addicted VIP

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    I would also like to point out that, other than stickied threads, this might possibly be the longest thread in Writers Cove.
     
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    Mark

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    Saunderitos: You're warned for the use of "retarded".

    Heshboy: Don't double post, triple post, quadruple post, quintuple post, or any other variation of the aforementioned terms which involves you posting numerous times in a row without using the edit button.
     
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    Kate

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    Now that I'm aware of this heshboy-created zone
    Mark has far surpassed my ability to pwn
    I don't think I'll bother waking up tomorrow morning
    'Cause my verse was pre-empted by the mod's warning

    Goddamnit, I suck.
     
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    heshboy

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    Yes mam/sir.

    Uncle Raj don't leave :(
     
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    Mark

    Mark Canadian Beauty LPA Administrator

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    My name is clearly masculine. :lol:
     
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    heshboy

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    Alright, I just didn't want to make an mistake and get owned. B)
     
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    saunderitos

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    :D

    cool, this is the first thread on any forums i've ever made that actually got somewhere


    and you can't be serious about being warned for using R E T A R D (sorry it came up weird otherwise) (XX


    Anyway,who would be up for a battle competition ?
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Yes Mark is very serious, read the rules.
    Using "reatrd" can be offensive to people as being mentally retarted is a serious mental disease, not something that should be made fun of.
    It may seem stupid to you if it's part of your regular speach, but stop and think what your implying with it. That is why it is not tollerated on LPA
     
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    saunderitos

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    i get you,but Raj was swearing, fuck,shit n all that.Whi isnt he warned?
     
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    Ether

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    what have we all stopped for.....I havent posted for ages coz you guys are all up when im alseep :(

    Competition....im in lol (might need some more prac though)

    We should start another battle now....maybe not dissin each other though...or leaning towards the homosexual area...as it could be offensive to some ^_^

    Just an idea...
     
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    Mark

    Mark Canadian Beauty LPA Administrator

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    Cursing's allowed.

    Imagine if someone here had a mentally handicapped family member or friend and saw your completely inconsiderate post and was offended. They wouldn't like it. We'd like to shelter people from such unecessary comments.

    Please, read the rules.
     
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    saunderitos

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    But, what if people get offended by cursing?

    same principal
     
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    Mark

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    It's not your place to question the rules we've set in place. You can obey them, or continuously get warned and then eventually banned. Take your warning and deal with it.

    There's a much less chance of somebody getting offended by cursing than there would be when you use that word. It's on a whole new different level. Just like racist comments are different from cursing.

    Now, do you want to keep pushing a futile point, or do you want to drop it and safe yourself and myself some aggravation? Let's choose the latter.
     
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    saunderitos

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    i'm fine with it,it just doesn't make sense to me
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    what's the halt for? let's get back to where we were before,
    i'll fire a shot at you, through your brain get my verses through,
    and you'll try and fail, but try to shoot once more, get off on bail,
    nothing is as impressive as it seems,should my verses be responsible, my opponents to redeem?
     
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    saunderitos

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    I ain't finished i've not even started
    I never stopped ,it was you who departed
    Scared o' my rhymes and my lines and i'm chasin' ya
    Perfection in lyrics ,they're too good they're killin' ya
    Lyrical missles but you are a gimmick
    Your shit don't flow, you're makin' me give it
    I'm just so bitter but you are another
    Only dude diggin' your shit is your mother



    hallo again freakoLP
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    hey....



    grab back the times when you never kicked arse,
    leaving your safety, i'm letting you pass,
    sympathy and sickening applaud is all i can gift,
    losing and merging into the losers drift.


    i'm gonna do 4 liners from now on...the long ones are very boring to read.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Hey I'm guessing I can join in? :lol:


    So apparently, you can't battle me
    I'll spin you around and watch you fall through the canopy
    Breaking every branch on your way down
    You hit 'em so hard that you're stuck with that frown
    And your rhymes are the same they're total whack
    So step back, watch me rap with the skill that you lack
     
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    saunderitos

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    You write short shit because you can't hack it
    Don't write 8 liners 'cause you have nothing to back it
    That frown that i'm stuck with
    Is caused by the shit that you fuck with
    Your lines lack intellect,style and gile.
    Watchin' emcees line in single file
    Watch me battle,battle and beat ya
    Collecting my harvest ,then i will reap ya
    Your shit don't intimidate me at all
    You make me rap just to see you fall


    *EDIT*missed a line out :lol:
     

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