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    May

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    Product

    You gave it to me with a smile
    Told me it was the greatest gift of all
    As I look at it I wonder what it is
    Why would someone give such a gift like this?
    Such a useless product
    Watching it…
    Feeling it…
    Hating it…
    Being it…
    When you touch it, it resists
    Ignore it and it expires…
    I return the gift back to you
    Hoping someone else will enjoy it

    So what do you guys think? Please respond :)
     
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    ass_kicker

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    its really good, but it reminds me of something... you know the song hounted but evanescence? watching me... wanting me... i can feel you pull me down... i dunno why it just reminds me of the song.
     
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    :eek: hey omg it does! lol i didn't realize that when i wrote it
     
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    yeah it really is like the song. but i like it. ^_^
     

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