Prisoner

I can smell the darkness,
drawing itself nearer to my very soul,
taking me captive,
hiding me in the shadowed jail,
waiting,
watching,
i've given it a figure,
the lights dim out further as the wind whistles louder in my ears,
behind the iron bars of my mind,
i am held prisoner,
until the sun can set me free


not my best but i think it's ok. Please read and review.

 

That's very short...but tight I must say.
I enjoyed reading it.

 

short but sweet.

 

short, but good..

 

Yeah...Lol I'm Not Gunna Say It's Short..ven though it is because everyone else did but i like it..!!!