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    Omar A

    Omar A Beyond Science LPA Super Member

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    Press Play

    Press play
    to see my life
    forward
    all the bad times

    Press play
    to see my happiness
    rewind
    I want to see it again

    Press play
    to see my love
    pause
    I can't get enough

    Press play
    to see my girl
    record
    I want to show her to the world
     
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    Alexis

    Alexis Extremely H! Vltg3

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    That's cool
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks
     
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    LinkinTheory

    LinkinTheory Well-Known Member

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    Uncoventional. Not really a rating, so I think a "good job" is in order.
     
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    arT saveS

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    thats really good but in your last verse...
    "Press play
    to see my girl
    record
    I want to show it to the world"...

    You might wanna change "i want to show it to the world" to "i want to show her to the world"

    Otherwise your calling "her" and "it"...

    Anyways its really good, to short if its spos'd to be a song though..unless its really short or really slow
     
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    Andrea

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    It's really good. ;)
     
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    Omar A

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    I changed it.
     

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