Post your best verse

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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    You can only post once. Post the verse of a song or a poem that you've made and you think it's the greatest of all in your songs/poems. Only one verse.

    Here goes mine:

    yesterday and today, the same thing again
    someday I would like to change, all my effort is in vain
    deeply inside of me, there's a lot of pain
    I'd like to get rid of them, but don't know when
    there is a lot of things that I don't get
    for whom am I doing this, for you or for my own sake?
    sometimes i wonder why I feel so unconfident?
    nobody listens to what I have to say
    it's like everything fades way,
    without no warning or anything to break
    I will ask this pain to don't stay, like if it would listen anyway
    and i ask this question to my myself, will I be able to change today?
     
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    DivinityDestroyed

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    It’s not my fault you’re spiraling down,
    Too confused to look around,
    It’s not my fault that I can’t breathe,
    You’ve got your hands around my neck.
    You’re squeezing tighter every minute,
    Taking my breathe away,
    Like as if my life is your drug,
    And the more you take from me,
    The better you feel inside,
    ‘Cuz the pain I am feeling,
    Is feeding your addiction,
    And you just can’t stop yourself.
     
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    Will

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    This is from a song that I never finished, but I think it's the best verse I've written...

    Though you know how much I care for you
    I won’t figure out how you truly feel
    If I never get the courage to talk to you
    So I can determine if this is real
    Though you know how I feel about you
    I won’t figure out how much you truly care
    If I never get the courage to talk to you
    So I can determine if you’re really there
     
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    Mcnasty

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    That is a really good verse Will.
     
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    Jamie

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    To stay true to me
    You gotta stop and see
    What I'm really made of
    There's no point turning back
    And looking down on me
    Can't you see that you'll eventually crack
    And I'll be the one turning back
    Into something I can't really mention
    All crushed up in the tension
    Wondering what its all for
     

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