Post the first poem you wrote

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    Glenn

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    If you can remember, post the first poem you wrote.

    If not, just post a very early poem.
     
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    $pvcxGhxztCasey

    $pvcxGhxztCasey meanwhile... LPA Addicted VIP

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    I love you baby
    I want you alot
    I want to take you down-town
    And fuck you alot

    I want to put you in my trunk
    And fuck you alot
    I want to throw you in my closet
    And turn off the lights alot

    FUCK FUCK FUCK
    SUCK SUCK SUCK
    HI HI HI

    Takin' out the garbage is alot of fun
    Because I'm so fuckin' emo
     
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    Andrea

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    Oh my god...Casey. LMAO. :lol: :lol:



    I have my first poem I ever wrote in a box somewhere. I'll look around for it whenever I have time.
     
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    Linja

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    -- Casey, :lol:

    All In Your Mind

    So you're waiting for the door
    For the shut of the door

    Once it's closed, you'll scratch and bleed
    Try so hard
    To satisfy your need

    He broke your heart, indulged in you
    But now he's gone
    You know it's true

    You know he's all right
    All right in your mind
    You tuck him in at night
    But it's all in your mind

    You'll love him
    Bleed for him
    But it's all in your mind
    You'll want him
    You'll need him
    The lost cause that's your mind

    The door is closed, the opportunity reversed
    When the dam is broken
    Remember you didn't rehearse

    But the fragile state, of your glassy mind
    Is bent out of shape
    The mirror in your mind

    You know he's all right
    All right in your mind
    You tuck him in at night
    But it's all in your mind

    You'll love him
    Bleed for him
    But it's all in your mind
    You'll want him
    You'll need him
    The lost cause that's your mind
     
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    Stick N move

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    my first poem is already on the site.. look for SOUR guys;)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    My World

    I feel a chilly breeze on my neck,
    As I’m walking down the street.
    All I want is for someone to be here,
    Someone to be with me.

    It feels as if the whole world hates me,
    But someone tell me why.
    God, why do I deserve this?
    Why does the sun never shine?

    Some times I sit in the shadows,
    Just sit there crying,
    All I want is a shoulder to cry on,
    Just don’t wanna be alone.

    Sometimes I feel like a ghost,
    Cause no one sees me.
    Everyone just,
    Walks right through me.

    But then one day I see her smiling,
    Smiling straight at me.
    I look behind me
    But there’s no one there.

    I turn back, to smile at her,
    But she’s already gone.
    She’s been sucked back up,
    From the grey world she came from.

    Though she’s gone her smiles still with me,
    And as I remember.
    The light breaks through the clouds,
    Destroying the darkness, dwelling inside me

    Now I’m not a ghost,
    But a man, whose seen an angel.
    She’s freed the spirit that was dormant inside me,
    I’m finally free to live.
     
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    The Outsider

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    Ripping and Tearing

    Now i see the light is fading,
    Anything but these feelings.

    They tear me up inside,
    Like a hungry animal.

    Wanting more and more,
    Until it kills itself trying.

    Now I know, I am to be,
    Something hidden from my eyes.

    The light is fading before me,
    My eyes are burning with no feeling.

    Coldness strikes me with a force,
    So great I cannot tell.

    If its true or not, now I see,
    The black velvet curtain draped around me.

    If this is me, what am I,
    Jumping into the darkness.

    Save me before you catch me,
    I stand here in my darkness.
     

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