Poetry

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    Cal

    Cal LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    *NOTE*
    this isnt a poem, thats just the title of the song

    i dont know what i should think of you know
    youve broken your promise
    youve left me wide open
    i dont know if i can trust you again
    im hurting inside now
    deep under the surface

    [Chorus]
    i feel like this pain will never end
    when will the wounds close up
    when will you make a mend
    my thoughts and actions inside my head
    the words and phrases that you said

    my head is like a rotting scar
    gang-green in the pain
    i feel a touch of jelousy
    running through my vain
    im empty now
    cant you see
    all i want is for one last breath

    [Chorus]
    i feel like this pain will never end
    when will the wounds close up
    when will you make a mend
    my thoughts and actions inside my head
    the words and phrases that you said

    i cant feel anymore
    youve curtained me over
    i cant take the pain
    i cant deal with it
    i cant deal with it
    i cant feel anymore
    youve sacraficed me down
    i cant take the pain
    i cant deal with it
    i cant deal with it

    [Chorus]
    i feel like this pain will never end
    when will the wounds close up
    when will you make a mend
    my thoughts and actions inside my head
    the words and phrases that you said
     
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    Dedicated

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    Great! ^_^
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    good job. you did great.
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    that's good. keep it up.
     

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