Poems/Songs from a new guy

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by BroknSolace, Oct 29, 2003.

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    BroknSolace

    BroknSolace Well-Known Member

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    very first time ive posted here..im new :shifty: but, im not sure how good this is, i just decided to post it
    And It Bleeds

    Since its seems now that I’m failing
    There isn’t anything worth saving
    Not a single thought of prevailing
    And so I move on

    Its taken a lot to come together
    Such a small piece to fragment
    How could it burrow so deep inside
    This room is scattered with cries

    Its still the same old thing
    And I cant stop It
    Its still not worth living
    And I want it

    Shuffling through the dark
    I’ve found a place to lie
    I want to just rest right now
    It would be too much to heal

    It pulls me apart
    Another thing to reach in deep
    My soul, it has been raped
    I don’t care to do much but sleep
    Does it come away bloody
    I feel a hand pierce the surface
    I’m so weak that it takes nothing
    To take away everything

    And it hurts
    My insides ripped
    So many hands in me
    Yet it has just begun to bleed

    My wall has long since fallen
    No love to keep out my hate
    As nothing into everything evaporates
    I’ve gone without a prayer

    Its still the same old thing
    And I cant stop It
    Its still not worth living
    And I want it

    It pulls me apart
    Another thing to reach in deep
    My soul, it has been raped
    I don’t care to do much but sleep
    Does it come away bloody
    I feel a hand pierce the surface
    I’m so weak that it takes nothing
    To take away everything

    ---and another random one..i guess i must be bored

    Somthing

    this time its too late
    everything has been mistaken
    my will is much to thin
    to stop your thoughts from taking over

    Every foot becomes an inch
    Our room to move has been cut down
    I thought we could find a way out but
    id forgotten what it takes to live

    Its not like it used to be
    This room is so lonely
    everyone has left and now
    my mind is going
    its somthing new
    how everything comes back to your
    Your karma will catch you in the end
    and youll only be present
    in my head

    im still refusing it
    youre only in my way
    ive found out that pushing hurts a bit
    ive lost what you might say

    refocusing my veiws
    i come here to rely
    on all of your prayers
    every one of your lies

    Its not like it used to be
    This room is so lonely
    everyone has left and now
    my mind is going
    its somthing new
    how everything comes back to your
    Your karma will catch you in the end
    and youll only be present
    in my head

    Collection of this place and
    A recollection of your eyes
    seeing everyone become
    a soldier of your eyes
    Preservation is the key
    i guess there is only night
    ill take off the light and
    forget all of your strife
     
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    Jamie

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    Theyre pretty good
     
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    BroknSolace

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    ohh, neato :D ...thanks for the response..i appreciate it
     
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    Missy

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    I like this part the best ^_^
     

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