This is a poem i wrote in March..it may not be perfect but i added sum LP titles so n e good critisism helps!!! Your like a Papercut Crawling underneath my skin I dont know where you start..or where to begin You leave me in mysteries gone before your there But I feel you with me like I feel the air The sound of life rushing into me brings me back I dont know you but I do maybe your just telling lies But i dont want to trust you cause i get so lost in your eyes When im with you Whispering i talk about fears that uprise I'm not Breaking The Habit i'm letting you in In the End you know you'll win I dont know why cant tell how But I think i just fell in love with my best friend...wow PS the best friend is a boy Please rate...C&C helps!!
Not to be mean, but I don't understand this poem. Lines like these confuse me: I dont know why cant tell how ?
Thanks linkinparkgurl...yeah i know it needs to be longer... And Jawknee...its ok if you dont understand it. :chaz: ~ Luv em all!