I thought I'd post this on here so hear your feedback. This is song I'm working on with my friend. It tells a story about this graphic novel my friends are working on at the moment. It's about a man who gets a virus that turns him into a plauge and infects other people. 1st Verse: He walks alone on a lonely night He stands alone with blood in his eyes He tries to hide all his pain inside He's left alone inside his broken home Chorus: As he wastes away, His soul will never change What he will do tonight is put the plauge inside He cannot feel the pain but he's been put to shame What will we do tonight if he can never die? 2nd Verse: He's trapped inside all his pain inside He'll never know how long he has to go How will he try to survive tonight? Slowly he fades away, His life will never change Chorus repeat
I dont get the "What he will do tonight is put the plauge inside". I dunno whether its because you need to have read the book or whether i;m not reading it right, but it seems a bit clumsy. I like the rest of though