Picture Perfect

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    Dedicated

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    This song is about remembering all of the great things you've done with your girlfriend/someone you love and wanting to capture them in your memory to keep them alive when they are gone. I've had this song written for quite a while and I've been editing small things on it when I go to post it and then ending up forgeting to post it.

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    Picture Perfect

    How many times, can I say the same things,
    Over and over again.
    Paint the sky, whatever colour you want,
    I don't care, at all.
    But just make sure you draw me, as I used to be,
    I can't bear to see myself like this, so draw me happy.
    So draw me happy,
    (I can't take it)
    Draw me happy,
    (I can't take it)
    Draw me happy.
    (I can't take it)

    Please let me, go down with my shipwreck, it's sinking,
    So slowly, we're drowning.
    It's stuck in my, one way mind, paint a picture,
    Of it, of you and me.
    We will paint the lovely sunset, as it used to be,
    And the hill where we sat and watched the sun, so happy,
    We were so happy,
    (I can't take it)
    Were so happy,
    (I can't take it)
    Were so happy.
    (I can't take it)

    Tears running down my face,
    It makes me cringe: I hate the taste,
    Living off memories, can't be healthy,
    Have you got something to show me?
    Tears running down my face,
    It makes me cringe: I hate the taste,
    Paint a picture of the memory,
    Draw one of you and me.

    How many times, can I say the same things,
    Over and over again.
    It's stuck in my, one way mind, paint a picture,
    Of it, of you and me.
    Paint the sky, whatever colour you want,
    I don't care, at all.
    Please let me, go down with my shipwreck, it's sinking,
    Paint a picture.
    You will paint the lovely sunset, as you want it to be,
    And the hill where we sat and watched the sun, you and me,
    But just make sure you draw us, as we used to be,
    I can't bear to see you cry like this, paint a picture of you and me.

    Yo amor tú,
    Usted es el retrato perfecciona,
    Dibújenos ambos juntos,
    Sentar muy cerca juntos, entrega mano,
    Usted es el retrato perfecciona,
    Yo amor tú.
     
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    Jamie

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    Excellent as usual
     
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    I really like what you wrote. You're very descriptive. Excellent work. Keep on writing. ;)
     
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    Cassie

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    This is a really nice song ^_^ I enjoyed reading it, kudos to you. This Writers Cove gives me the urge to write something meaningful :D Keep writing
     
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    wow i'm speechless, that was awsome, even better than anything i've ever written before. How long did it take you to make that?
     
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    nice... you did it differently... for a change... not the usual... very good... very really good... really very really good... uhu...
     
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    It took me about a week and then another 2 weeks editing small things in it :)








    Thanks for the comments everyone :)
     
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    For those of us who don't speak spanish, maybe you should include a translation to it
     
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    means:

    I love you,
    You are picture perfect,
    Draw us both together,
    Sitting near each other, hand in hand,
    You are picture perfect,
    I love you.

    but if you use a translator it says:

    I love you,
    You are the portrait perfects,
    Draw us both together,
    To sit down very nearby together, delivers hand,
    You are the portrait perfects,
    I love you.

    ^_^



    :lol:


    :rasberry:
     
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    Adam

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    gr8 song
    got any tips
    :D
     

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