a poem by me. called Love: Your eyes are like the moon reflecting the light from the sun They will never fade or die even if the world became dark for an eternity Ever existed this fate and it shall not be destroyed Upon this earth there is a person for everyone, two made for each other Whatever happens we will never split for the forces of love and fate has bound us It is luck that will bring us together To our ever existing fate as long as we live and another called Life, One step at a time: I walk in to a room I see happy faces Happy people, laughing and joking Having a good time I look back at me, and think I wish I were like them For me life is like a sad story I am alone, I feel upset I am not one of them I do not fit in anywhere Not a single person cares how I feel Social situations are torture for me, I can’t read peoples emotions People are like a textbook Hard to understand Hard to learn about I live in my own world Just me, nobody but me I work for me and get good grades for me I live life one step at a time
man those are kool poems . well done .... u can tell the lp in them .... keeep it up u might wanna try to make them in2 songs
Dude. I love them (bloody hell....Kat reveiwing a poem?! This never happens!) Seriously, they are very very true - easy to relate to and very easy to understand. Language is good, layout is even better...and the best thing about it...it doesn't use rhyming couplets (I see so much of that everyday and it really annoys me >_>') Anyway. I salute you mate. Nice work Keep them as poems...not songs