Pendulum - The Island Pt. 1 (Dawn) - Blackdonut Remix

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    Paolo

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    Decay

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    Very nice remix! I'm not really at home with the Dance/House genre so I'm not really fit to give real critique about the song. The only thing I can say is that sometimes, I have the feeling that the vocals should be a bit louder. Could be just a matter of opinion though.

    I'd actually like you to make a part 2 of this one, just like there's a part 2 of 'The Island'. Give it the same amount of energy that the original part 2 has.

    Keep it up!
     
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    travz21

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    I like it.

    The synth that fades in panned left in the intro is a little too strong. It takes away the main focus from the lead synth. A sine wave might sound better next to the lead synth. Or maybe just mix it a little lower.

    The vocals are a little too quiet from 2:30 - 4:35

    Nice instrumental work.
     
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    Paolo

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    Thanks for your feedback :) I edited it a bit, hope it's better now.
     
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    Decay

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    Yup, you nailed it. Great job!
     
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    Very nice.
     
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    Pretty good work thar.
     

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