Pages of something I wish was a miracle. Write until I've gone undone, exposed for all eyes to see. For until everyone can see me for more than a visionary, I await calmly, or so I wish I could. It is too early for me to be awake but I am wide awake with tears streaming down my face. My cheek against the pages of a journal so sinister, ink rolling down the paper like my tears. Write until early dawn, till I can forget all of my worries in this life.
i really liked it, it was very imaginative! but i felt that you could have worked alittle more on the flow of it. apart from that, it was really good! i really liked this part too!
I agree, a great piece of writting, very imaginative and original but i think the flow has to be worked on a bit more. I really like it, hope to see much more soon.