you sit beside me and i start to shudder you ask me that question but to me it's like thunder why do you ask me, over and over you know the answer, so why do you torture i don't love you no more i wish you would leave me alone get me out of your head so you can at least move on honesty can be brutal but i don't give a shit i want to say what i like so you will just have to live with it what ya think?
hey, pretty cool. seems like this person really did something to make you mad . Good work, now we're talking! just keep working and you'll find how fun and painful it can be sometimes to write something deep and meaningful. I enjoyed this one
ya think that this is the best one yet? funny, this just happened to be the very first one i wrote and i was sooo mad when i wrote it!
i think this one is better as well. And if you wrote it when you where mad then you can more easily get those emotions on paper. just when you write. Don't think. let it flow from you mind to your pen. Dont interupt it. Your emotions are always more powerful than logic and reasoning. Dont even try to rhyme. just write what is in your heart. and you will have a great poem.