Where did she go? She’s not gone anywhere It seems her heart has run away It doesn’t matter if they stare All of her memories Buried in her mind They’ve all given up She’s too hard to find She’s sitting there Watching Watching them Trying They try so hard To bring her back Bring back the beauty Bring back the love Bring back the Angel That fell from above Her love was so bright It was powerful, splendid Her blood was so red It was beautiful, unrivalled The way it ran down her arms The way it slid past her stomach The way it will Never flow quite free again Where is she hiding? She ran away long ago Did she do it on purpose? Did she really mean it? All the questions are left unanswered All the answers are left unsaid Her beauty is cold, her passion is frozen But there’s really no choice, she’s nothing but dead Her hopes are shattered, her dreams came crashing down But there’s really no choice, not in her head The choice that she has Isn’t really a choice Just like the voice that she has Isn’t really a voice A whisper, spoken softly A scream, ringing clear A silent death, slowly She felt herself disappear Into the shadow Into the abyss Somehow, she knows Somehow, she feels That though she only lived to eighteen She was dead long ago
Hmm...I'm split on this song. There are some very well written verses, but then there are some that could use some work. It's not bad at all though. Good job.
Thank you all. Faajpe, thanks for the constructive criticism, can you tell me which ones you didn't like, and I can work on them. Cheers.