OK, this is a little weird..it's written in first person...from her point of view, so its a different but i think its really good Nobody really does care but they say they do all this love is more than i can bare #### all of you sometimes i think death is the only way out no one really cares, here comes the count 1,2,3, counting silently in my mind thinking violently my knife is what i need bleed, bleed, bleed shut up, you dont care dont talk, i dont wanna hear shut up, you dont care dont talk, i dont wanna hear sometimes i cut just to feel the pain everyone that sees say im insane 1, 2, 3, talking to myself dont fear for me, fear for everyone else im not crazy, im not crazy Nobody really does care but they say they do all this love is more than i can bare #### all of you nobody really does care but they all say they do all the love is more than i can bare #### all of you sometimes people really think i listen well i dont, #### you, quit your bitchin im gonna do what i wanna do none of you can stop me, so #### you i know she thinks about this cause she always acts like this
whoah.. thats really goood.. its like u can actually noe how ppl that are in that situation feel.. .. but all in all great work! mhmm..