One Black Rose

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    ChooseYourPoison

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    Slowly I start to awaken
    By subconciously looking in your eyes
    Funny how I used to adore them
    Bright did they once shine
    You offer your hand to pull me away
    Yet you let go of my hand once before
    I gave you my trust and you betrayed it
    Then kicked me hard on to the floor
    Behind your facade you are crying,
    behind crystal black tears, you're hollow and nothing more
    Poe's Raven, to be left with nothing
    Your conscience allowing you to speak, nevermore, nevermore
    Suddenly colors appear brighter, whiter and clearer than before
    Black has dissolved, now that the problem has been resolved

    Many years later as I stand poised
    Upon your unmarked grave,
    I reminisce all that I once gave
    And thought "how I could have been so benevolent?"
    And as I felt the first snowflake of winter
    Fall upon my head
    I placed one single blackened rose
    Upon the mount of earth, now said to be your blanket
    Then the vow I said under a low, icy breath, I shall never forget: "I shall not cry for your abscence"
    And I walked away in silence
    Quietly, of course, as not to wake the dead
     
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    forgotten girl

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    i really like it, well done :)
     
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    i really like that its beautiful
     
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    Razan

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    I like the idea of putting Edgar A. Poe in it, it works beautifully.
     
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    x3r09

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    this seems to be one of the deepest ones i have read. amazing job, dude!
     

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