Music On 2 The Next 1, New song. Rate it!

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What do you think of "On 2 The Next 1"?

  1. 10 - This is epic!

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  2. 9

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  3. 8

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  4. 7

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  5. 6

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  6. 5 - Ehhh, It's Alright.

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  10. 1 - This is ******* Turrible!

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  1. #1
    ReDefenition

    ReDefenition Active Member

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    Finished my new Hip-Hop track. I composed the beat, wrote the lyrics, recorded my own vocals, mixed and mastered the song, as well as found ways to get it published to iTunes, Spotify ect. I know your probably thinking, :impossibru:

    I would love to hear your opinions, Good or Bad!
    Check it out and let me know what you think!:bradwink:

    https://soundcloud.com/re-defenition/on-2-the-next-1
     
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    Filip

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    The beat was just awesome! The vocals we're a little too silent, so I couldn't really understand most of the lyrics, but the hook was great. Gave it an 8/10. :chuck:
     
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    lime treacle

    lime treacle You are not alone Über Member

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    Yeah, that hook is awesome.
     
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    ReDefenition

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    Sweet! Glad your digging it!
    I definitely understand where your coming from on the verse's vocals though.
    Thanks for listening! :rastamike:
     
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    RyRy

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    I really liked it! The whole vibe of the song was really cool. Loved the instrumental 100%. Vocals were pretty sweet. Great job.
     
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    ReDefenition

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    Thanks a lot!
    I figured, for some reason, that LP Fans might like my music.
    So far, I'm right! :D
    Thanks to everyone listening, voting, and replying! Appreciate it.
     
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    Filip

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    Keep making good music, everyone will love it. :lol:
     
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    Zak

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    Needs more sub! Also, the vocals, as mentioned by someone else earlier, need to be louder. Good track none-the-less.
     
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    Ty5onY2

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    I usually don't care for any rap other than Mike's, but I gotta say this was pretty enjoyable to listen to :] You did a really good job! Voted 8
     
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    Agent

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    The vocals are too low in the verses, but the mixing sounds very good. Did you learn mixing/mastering by yourself... it sounds very professional. Good job.
     
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    Kevin

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    I like it!
    But yeah the vocals in the verses are really hard to hear.
     
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    ReDefenition

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    Yep! I taught myself how to do all of this without ever taking a lesson! I am very proud of that :)

    Thanks everyone! I really am glad to hear everyone here is enjoying my music. With a few more years of practice, maybe I can get to the skill of this guy:hobo: haha :cool:
     

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