I got the idea after I saw the Numb/Encore video and decided to do a revision. Numb Verse 1: What the hell are you waiting for? Start walking ma' there's the door Never in my life have I felt this before I remember we met Our souls set for different goals Your life handed too you I had to fight and struggle just stay clean and avoid the hussle Changed my ways just to get with Now I don't know what to do I'm not close to you I've become so... Chorus (Numb)I don't know how else to feel This can't be real I feel so distant from myself Every day's like I'm someone else Verse 2: Smothered by this by this thing you call You didn't know when to let go Now just trying to push myself away But you don't get You won't let me go in peace You're becoming such disease That's there's no cure My thoughts loop back to you And things we'd Now I'm just praying for the day I won't feel so (Numb) Bridge You give me space back You come around just argue and scream I've yelled thigs back I didn't really mean We've disappointed each other You should just move on to another So you can pull his strings(You know what I mean) Run his life, Your not my wife Don't fell so bad Had know clue what we had Now it's your turn feel... Numb
i enjoyed it alot, the part that stood out for me the most was verse 1, now thats writting, keep it up, whenever you get inspired start writing