I am sitting by myself now. All alone in this very chair. I want to understand my purpose. But until then, I'm getting nowhere. Until I reach the end I guess I shall keep trying But who knows if I'll succeed? I can't continue all of this, I cannot keep on lying. But it's coming back to me. It's all coming back. I shall sit nowhere else. I shall always sit right here. Maybe I will find a way. But that is all I do fear. I am still wondering what I'm doing here. I need somewhere to go. But if I step away from this chair. What will happen, who knows? I know that's it hard to understand my own ways It's hard enough for me too. I still sit here all of the time everyday And I am waiting for you. Waiting for this. I shall sit nowhere else. I shall always sit right here. Baby, we could find a way But that is all I do fear. I still sit all by myself now. I need somewhere to go... Maybe I will eventually leave here. But there's nowhere else to stay...
pretty impressive! but theres one thing id like to know.............................. does the poem describe defiancy or hoplessness or both or none?? to me its somewhere between defiance and hoplessness i cant decide, but it may mean something else to you.
i think that line ruined it [/b][/quote] Meh, maybe it would have been better if it wasn't put there. But thanks for all of the positive feedback, guys.