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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by kotrunks, Jan 23, 2005.

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    kotrunks

    kotrunks Well-Known Member

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    Now

    Get out

    Shut your mouth
    Shut me out
    I don’t want to hear it

    What you say
    Only removes me
    From my life

    I want to be free
    I can’t stand

    I only crawl
    On the floor
    In agony
    Below you

    This needs to change
    Before someone else dies…
    Inside
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it's got more meaning..yet..it's short and not quite significant...you play well with your words, though
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    Short but good.
     
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    Jon[athan]

    Jon[athan] Sincerly, written from my brothers blood machine.

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    wow...short, sweet, and too the point. yet powerful. i like it ^_^
     

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