Well here is another of my poems,written long ago,please read it and comment on it. Nothing Nothing is what I am looking for cause when I am looking for something it is the only thing that I find finally it's this nothing which adds up to something People tell don't expect anything and they tell don't accept nothing and when they do get something they think it's everything which turns out to be nothing Nothing can reduce my pain cause pain is everything I have pain has snatched happiness from me cause when others get pained I feel happy Nothing can make me happy cause I find happiness in nothing I think nothing can better me and yet when something does,I think it's nothing
hey, once again really cool! you know what i just love? that with this lines you knew how to express... nothing seriously, i really like your work and enjoy reading your poems. pretty good, keep it up! i love the way in which you demonstrate that you dont really need a speech to tell lots of things & express one or different emotions this well. Awesome poem!
B) thanx for all those valuable comments,actually nothing was what I was looking for,but look what I have got, something :whistle: ,thanx all.
This is like a think before you think line put into a poem lol. Very interesting, really good. It had my brain boggled for a minute.
Well you cant call it an out and out negative poem,I guess if you see you can find that it is as much positive as much as its negative,lol should I call it a neutral poem ,but thanx for your honest comments.